5SC Prompt #7 - 20/1/18 by Max

19/1/2018

I see books in the bookshop under the ribbon. The girl is sitting on the coloured bench with brown sides. The cat is having a lay down. It looks like spring because of the leaves. I would like to go into the shop because it has lots of books to read and I like books with pictures.

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2 Comments

Mrs Skinner

19/1/2018 09:07:58 pm

Hello Max!
This is a super set of sentences showing how carefully you have looked at the picture.
I think you may be ready to look at 100 Word Challenge to share your writing. Have a look at 100wc.net
Thank you so much for sharing your great writing.

Miss Witherspoon

23/1/2018 09:34:44 pm

Hi Max!
I really like your blog! You described the picture in a great way- you must have looked at it for a long time to notice all of that. You use punctuation and adjectives very well. I think it is spring too- the flowers and leaves a lovely and bright! I definitely think you're ready for the 100 word challenge!

5SC Prompt #7 - 20/1/18 by Max

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